The Halloween Nightmare
Ugh!! I think I've eaten too much Halloween candy!! I think i'll just sleep in the couch a little. "Henry"?? "HENRY"!!! Said a loud and scratchy voice. "W-w-hat-t"? I said feeling all worn out. *Ugh* It's probably just my mom again, she doesn't like me sleeping on her couch she talks in a very patient voice for example "Henry, that's why we have something called a room to sleep in, your ruining my couch!!" "Oh my sweet sweet mom, *Sight* W-wait a minute... my family is gone of to Wisconsin to visit grandma!! I'm home alone!! "Oh Henry.. were are you??" The vicious thing said!! I can already image myself dead in about 5 minutes if not because of whatever's here, or because ill die of fright anyways!! "HENRY!!" Suddenly i wake up in the floor i guess i fell in the process of the scare, So.. I get up to just see that my parents are back from grandmas early and with a very mad face, *Oh* but here I go with the scold from sleeping in the couch!! Maybe the nightmare would've not been so bad!!
Great story! That was fun to read and it felt like I was reading a mini-book! There was only a few spelling mistakes, but that's all I think you could improve on.
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