Saturday, October 29, 2016
Halloween Story
"There" said my Dad, as he handed me our Jack-O-Lantern. "Just set it on the porch anywhere you want." "Ok" I replied. I went outside and found the perfect place to set the Jack-O-Lantern! I was about to go inside when I heard the leaves ruffle on the bush. I stopped and turned around. I looked around the yard and there was nothing there! I stayed outside for a little bit longer. I started going inside when I hear "RAWR!" It was my 3 year old brother dressed in his dragon Halloween costume. I screamed as loud as I could. I'm pretty sure I woke up my whole neighborhood! I told my brother to come inside with me. We went inside and told mom and dad about my little brother scaring me. We all laughed and fell asleep watching a movie!
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
I loved your story! I really liked how you had a lot of detail in it. Also, you had really great punctuation. One thing you could revise is to add some more to the end of your story. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI liked how his little brother scared him and how the main character reacted to that. That was really cool.
ReplyDelete