Friday, October 28, 2016
Halloween Story
Tap tap tap.The sound came from inside the closet.Quietly,I crept forward to the door when all of a sudden I saw a shadow.It didn't look like any shadow I've ever seen before.It had 3 arms and what seemed to look like a tail.I was so frighten that ran out of my room. I guess I was running so fast I hit a wall or something,and wow did it hurt.That wall left me a bruise on my leg bigger than my phone.Anyways after I stopped complaining I went to my brothers room to see it he was there.He wasn't. Then I started to wonder if he was just pulling my leg.So I went to open the closet door and surprise,surprise it was him.I asked him what he was doing, and he said he was trying to scare me.I told him "mission accomplished, now leave!"
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Good job! I really liked how you used an idiom in there. It was a great story. I would revise your story and make it more detailed. Other than than it was really good!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I like how you used onomatopoeia (tap tap tap). I like how the story went from scary to funny when you found your brother. :) Your story could've been more detailed, but it was a great story. :):P:):P
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ReplyDeleteThis was a great story. It had a great flow but i think it would be better to add more detail but otherwise it was great.
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