New Years Resolution
My new years resolution is to stop fighting and arguing with my siblings. Every time they do something to me like laugh at me and even if they're just being annoying sometimes I start to argue with them or I end up hitting them, good thing I have mostly brothers. but don't worry I don't hit them hard. But that's my new years resolution so far it isn't coming out as I planned but ill get there.
Your story was great! I like how you how you talked in detail. One thing you can do better is more details.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting story but it could have used flare like talk about how once you left hooked your brother so he had to he gave you the remote or some thing like that.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting story but it could have used flare like talk about how once you left hooked your brother so he had to he gave you the remote or some thing like that.
ReplyDeleteI really liked yours! But, you do have a couple of run-on sentences, and you could use more capitals and punctuation. Other than that, I thought it was funny and you did a great job! Keep up the good work! :)
ReplyDeleteI really liked yours! But, you do have a couple of run-on sentences, and you could use more capitals and punctuation. Other than that, I thought it was funny and you did a great job! Keep up the good work! :)
ReplyDeletenice writing so creative and could use a bit of spelling corrections but other wise good job!
ReplyDeleteLoL! Great work Jackie, you really "hit" it out of the park on this one! I´d love to see you extend your piece so I can read more of your writing. Keep up the great work!
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