Wednesday, January 25, 2017

                           My Un resolution 

My un resolution is to stop using my phone.Sadly it is not working.I guess I'm just too addicted to my phone.Sometime i'll be doing homework I'm then a notification pops up and i can't help my self I must check it.Even my writing has gotten weird.I keep wanting to shorten everything, but I will stop my addiction (eventually).


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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2017 at 9:36 AM

    Great job! Your paragraph was great. You could some commas in it but all in all good job!

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2017 at 12:51 PM

    This was a great paragraph! It made me laugh and think about how I need to stop using my phone as well! All there is that needs fixing is that there are a couple of capitalization problems, but other than that I really loved your paragraph!

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2017 at 12:59 PM

    That was great! I need to stop that too

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 27, 2017 at 9:50 AM

    that was funny! You could do better by writing more and checking your spelling. Other than that it was good.

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