My Unresolution
My Unresolution is to stop eating whenever I want to. When I get home from school, I go straight to my pantry to look for a snack. My mom usually comes out of her room and says hi and ask me what I did at school. So I tell her and afterwards, I finish my snack and take a nap or do homework or go on my phone. When I'm done with whatever I did, I want to eat something else. So I have another snack and nobody cares. But when I eat to much, my mom gets mad at me. She tells me that it's almost time for dinner and that if I eat it, I'll be to full. I usually listen to her, but when she's not home I eat a huge snack. So this year I'm gonna make things right and stop eating whenever I want. Now that I've wrote this, I want to eat a cookie. : )
I like it! I need to stop that too.
ReplyDeleteI do that too, it was great!
ReplyDeleteFunny, because as I read this, I was chowing down on my giant after-school snack. You kept my attention great and I really enjoyed it. If you were to revise, consider changing or adding some punctuation. Great job Marcus, stay awesome!
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