Wednesday, January 11, 2017
Un-Resoloution
My New Years UN-Resoloution is to stop drinking soda. Ive been not drinking soda at home for the past couple months, but the hard part is when we go out to eat that's the hard part! I can go on forever at home, but as soon as we go out to eat its a whole different story the cans of sugar just go so well with Restaurant/Fast food, But this year its gonna be different I'm gonna do it if I can do it at home I can do it there just as easy. So come on Pepsi Come at me.
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I really liked reading your un-resolution. Its a very good on.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you ended your paragraph. One thing you could fix is to add punctuation. I saw how you needed a comma and apostrophes. Other than that you did really good
I like your un-resolution very much. It's very good. But, I agree with Lia. You could add a punctuation at the end and put in a comma and apostrophes. But all in all very good.
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