Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Pumpkin pie

I think that pumpkin pie is the best thanksgiving dish. Its so delicious, I love pumpkin pie its my favorite but not just any pie, my moms homemade pie is the best i love it so much the taste of it is just so good. My mom wont tell anyone her recipe because that's our family recipe and its her special pie. And that's why i think that pumpkin pie is the best thanksgiving dish.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 30, 2016 at 4:33 PM

    You did a great job, but some of your sentences run a little bit. Just add some coma's and its perfect! Keep it up!

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  2. AnonymousDecember 1, 2016 at 9:46 AM

    You made me want pie! One thing that you could've done better is capitalizing some of your letters. Other than that, it is a good paragraph

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