Tuesday, November 29, 2016

Which Thanksgiving Dish is the Best

                   My favorite thanksgiving dish is any sort of pie and mashed potatoes. Oh man, my mom has to stop me from taking the whole bowl of fluffy white potatoes. Whenever my grandma serves the pie I call the biggest piece. I can't resist the Martinelli's either that stuff is heaven in a cup. Thanksgiving is completely worth eating until your hearts content and gaining a few extra pounds.
                    

6 comments:

  1. great job i agree with you i love both of those they're my favorite

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  3. I agree with the mashed potatoes and pie. They are too good!

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  4. Good job! Very funny, Next time try putting in evedence.

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  5. Thats really funny. I do the same thing! I think that you need a bit more evidence, but how could you give evidence that your moms mashed potatoes are delicious? So I think you did a great job.

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  6. Great job, your details were great.You are very good at convincing people. I want that delicious fluffy mashed potatoes right now. You are great at stating the facts and adding comedy to your writing. Something you could improve on is adding evidence to your writing.

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