Monday, November 14, 2016
Many people say that turkey or stuffing is the best food during Thanksgiving, but according to FluentU.com, pumpkin pie is coming right behind them, also, it sates; "The pumpkin spice flavor in America now means that autumn is here. Almost everything has a pumpkin spice version! There's pumpkin spice coffee, pumpkin spice cookies... there are even pumpkin spice sausages and bagels! Surprisingly, the flavor doesn't even have actual pumpkin in it. But pumpkin pie does have pumpkin. A delicious warm spice and pumpkin filling inside a flaky crust will always warm you up!" Who wouldn't want a good tasting pie for desert during Thanksgiving?
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Very well written! I totally agree pumpkin pie is the best.
ReplyDeleteThanks for telling me how many pumpkin spice things there are! I never knew about the sausages! The one thing I would change is that your citation is almost all of your paragraph
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy how you used quotes and facts to back up your statement. Your essay has a good kick to it and kept my attention. One thing you could change is quoting the website you got it from
ReplyDeleteGreat work on keeping my attention,I thought your quotes were a strong touch to your writing. Some this you could change is the quoting. Although there was a few flaws this was a great paragraph.
ReplyDeleteoops I messed up on the word something.
DeleteGreat job! You easily kept my attention and I really liked your story! I also liked how you told us about the different spices. I never knew that?!?! One thing I would change would be to make sure you don't forget quotation marks because its almost your whole paragraph but other than that I LOVED IT!
ReplyDeleteExcellent job Anna!! I'm glad you told me all the different pie spices. I like how you quoted from an article. Keep up the good work!!
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