Sunday, November 20, 2016

It not thanksgiving with out the turkey

  It is not thanksgiving without the turkey. Turkey has been a part of our world to feast on why to long to die. According to the cite wonderopolis "when the colonists sat down to dine with the Wampanoag Indians, turkey was the main dish."(2)  In other words the big fat bird on your table that you eat every thanksgiving is because when the America settlers came they were poor and hungry so the Indian should them how to plant corn and other goods. They then settled down on thanksgiving and ate like kings with the biggest juiciest turkeys they could find and kill on their plates. Also some people say turkey is supper unhealthy and makes you tired because of the potassium this is flatus the reason yours tired is because of the calories. In a few word the turkey has been around way to long to be giving the cold shoulder and is with out a doubt the best dish ever so should continue to be the highlight of November.

4 comments:

  1. I really like your post! I loved learning about how Thanksgiving came together with the turkey. Your punctuation was great but your grammar could use some work. Otherwise, keep up the good work!!

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  2. I really like this post! I like how you brought in a little bit of research and a story. You did good on the description. I got a little bit confused because you were saying how good turkey is. Then you were talking about how it's not good for you. Otherwise you did really good!

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  3. You wrote a very well structured paragraph, I wish you hadn't gone on that tangent about how unhealthy is it though.

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  4. I also thought it was great. I also didn't think that tangent about turkey being unhealthy was very helpful to your paragraph.

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