Inside the Closet
Tap. Tap. Tap. The sound came from inside the closet. Quietly, I crept toward the door and as I walked, grabbed a bat that was siting next to my bed. I opened it very quiet and slowly. But, when I did there was nothing there. It was very strange. Then I forgot as the days went on.
One week later, my teacher assigned a group project of three people. My friends and I decided to work in my house that day. Tap. Tap. Tap. We all heard that noise again. We all stared at another. We all grabbed something and headed towards the door, very quietly. We all opened it.
We couldn't believe our eyes. There was somehow a secret pathway. In my closet. It was like a transporter. We all decided to go in. When we did there was son crazy things. The monsters scared us. Then a kid saved us us it was weird. We all glared. After that day we never had a never piece of candy.
Great job, I loved your discription. I'm a little confused with the plot, try giving more details next time. Overall you did a great job.
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