I've always liked writing ever since I was a little kid. I think writing is fun and relaxing.
When I was a little kid I would always make up different stories and I thought I was the best writer in the world. I thought that I was going to make millions of dollars by writing stories.
Fifth and sixth grade was when I really started to like to write. I got exited whenever we would have a really fun writing assignment.
Now I write all the time, because sometime around January of last year my brother left for his mission, so now every week I get to write him about everything that is happening in my my and my families lives. I always look forward to write him every week.
I love writing and I can't wait to do it this year.
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ReplyDeleteHey good job Brooklyn!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you mentioned your brother! I dont know how it feels to have a sibling leave, but I do know how it feels to have some sort of relative go!! Maybe, try to mention more why you like writing and explain what type of assignments you had to do!! Otherwise it was FANTASTIC and I love to read your writing!!
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ReplyDeleteHey good job on this post Brooklyn. I like how you mentioned that you mentioned that your brother is on a mission so you get to write him every week. I think maybe to improve you could try like Alivia said to talk about what type of writing you like to do. Other than that you did a really good job.
ReplyDeleteI hope you do grow up and make millions of dollars writing! Writing to someone else and recording your life is a fantastic idea. It's solid weekly practice too. As you revise, maybe talk about how reading your brother's writing influences you as a writer too. Thanks for your hard work and welcome to class!
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