Thursday, September 22, 2016
My Writing Life
I have always loved writing! I can still remember the very first story that I wrote when I was little. It was called "The Dancing Trees." It was about this mom and daughter who lived together in the woods. On one morning, the daughter woke up, looked out of her window, and saw the trees dancing outside! When she told her mom what she had seen, her mom didn't believe her. Every morning, she kept seeing them dance. She told her mom what she saw every single time, but her mom didn't believe her until the very end. One morning, the daughter looked out of her window, and the trees had stopped. She went to tell her mom that they weren't dancing anymore, but when she got to her, her mom said that she saw the trees dance that morning! That was the end of the story. I was very little, but my dad set up my own little writing folder on his laptop that I could use at any time to type up stories! I have still been using that exact same folder on the exact same laptop ever since! I have always loved writing stories, and I don't think I'll ever stop liking it!
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This is a really good paragraph Aariyah! It was fun reading the story you wrote. I think you did great and there is nothing that you need to improve on. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your paper! I liked your story about the trees. I wish you had more examples about your writing life.
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ReplyDeleteHi Aariyah! I thought it was cool that I could feel your excitement about this topic. You also had a note and notice phrase in your writing when you say "been using that exact same folder on the exact same laptop"! You might try, adding a concluding sentence that relates back to your first sentence, i'm not certain if in the last sentence you "don't think you're ever stop liking it” is supposed to mean you’ll never stop loving to write or it means that you’ll always love that folder of your stories.
ReplyDeleteMy heart warmed to hear that your dad set it up and you still use the same folder:) That's cool and having supportive parents is wonderful. I really liked the idea that you wrote on--well done. As you revise, add more about your writing process and which type of writing you like. So glad to have you in class! Thanks:)
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