My Writing Life
When I was Little I never really liked to write, but in 5th grade my teacher showed me a good and fun way to write. I started to love It. Everyday I would go on my google drive and write little stories I had made up. My favorite type of writing is creative writing. Soon writing became my favorite thing ever. Once I was done with my new story I would show my teacher and my mom. They always said it was good ,but it never really was perfect. In sixth grade I had a new teacher and new writing life. I learned to write well. My sixth grade teacher taught me a lot of new writing tips. I Became an even better writer than I had been before. Now that I'm in honers language arts and I have Mrs. Robins as my teacher, I know that I will be an even better writer that I've ever been.
Spencer Nelson
You did an AMAZING job on this essay. I love how you explained how you got into writing and started to love it even more! One thing that I think you can tweek a little bit is not repeating your sentences in a different way.
ReplyDeleteHey spencer!!!
ReplyDeleteGood job! Your essay was great and I can totally relate to you! Maybe try to add why you liked 5th grade and how it impacted you! Otherwise great job!!!
Great job Spencer it was great i like how you said that you have been getting better at it, i can so relate to that great job.
ReplyDeleteSpencer, I loved what you wrote. I thought that your sentences were very nice. What made them so good is that it created a picture in my mind! One thing I would have liked to see is if you would have said who your fifth and sixth grade teachers were, and how their personalities are. But, otherwise it was awesome.
ReplyDeleteSpencer, I loved what you wrote. I thought that your sentences were very nice. What made them so good is that it created a picture in my mind! One thing I would have liked to see is if you would have said who your fifth and sixth grade teachers were, and how their personalities are. But, otherwise it was awesome.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job!! Spencer
ReplyDeleteI think you're going to grow in leaps and bounds with me and I'm so glad to have you in class! I enjoyed reading the connection between how you grew as a writer and school. That's school doing what school is supposed to do! I'm excited to see your growth. As you revise, write more about the specific type of writing you do. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteNice post Spencer I actually had the honors last year and the teacher grew me into a good writer.
ReplyDeleteNice post Spencer I actually had the honors last year and the teacher grew me into a good writer.
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