Tuesday, March 21, 2017

My Dream

A dream to me, is something your always thinking about. It's always rolling around in your mind. A dream to me is going to place I can call home, with a family that will love and assist me, with a sturdy house that smells of fresh baked cookies, and with beautiful kids that I can call mine. A dream I've always had is to marry a wonderful husband who can support our family and afford the many things we may need. The thought of my own house, my own car, and my own kids will for sure be a trial, but my dream is something i'm willing to fight for.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 21, 2017 at 3:55 PM

    Beautiful witting,good job.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 27, 2017 at 9:51 AM

    Keep up the good work

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  3. AnonymousMarch 29, 2017 at 4:08 PM

    I loved this! Your writing is wonderful. I liked how you explained it well. One thing you could fix is to make it a little longer but Great Job.

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  4. Rachel RobinsApril 2, 2017 at 5:21 PM

    Beautiful writing--what it lacks in specifics, it makes up for in really beautiful language: "a place to call home...beautiful kids I can call mine." You sounded older just now and I really enjoyed reading it. Watch those capitalizations, but well done!

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