Tuesday, March 7, 2017

     My dream of the future is to be a Civil Engineer. I am interested in learning how bridges and towers are made. I want to go to Brigham Young University and for BYU to have a better basketball team than Utah University, on second thought that isn't happening. Finally, I hope to have enough money to travel to Europe.

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  1. Good Job! maybe next time make it longer but other than that very great job!

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  4. Well Zac it is always good to be CIVIL. Anyways, I liked how you had what schools you wanted to go to already planned out. I think maybe to make it a bit longer next time.

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  5. defiantly add a little more detail if you revise. I like how you know what college you want to go to, and what you want to be.

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  6. I agree, more detail otherwise great.

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  7. You'll be a fantastic Civil Engineer:) Good start, would like to see more details.

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