Wednesday, December 14, 2016



            My family(s) tradition is that  every other year we go down to California to go to my dads and on Christmas Eve we stay up and play games with each other and laugh and talk until 12:00 then we open presents with the family then that same night we leave the house and drive all the way back to Utah and by Christmas morning we are here in Utah and we eat a fast breakfast then we open more presents, But then some years its different like this year we are staying with my mom and when we are with my mom we go to bed super early and wake up on Christmas to run down the hall and see the presents then a couple days after that we go to California and open presents with out dad. Christmas is pretty crazy for us.

3 comments:

  1. That sounds pretty crazy! One thing you could've done is add a title and correct some of the words. Such as, Dads and 12:00. I would like to know if you meant 12:00 am or pm. Other than that, you did great!

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  2. Great job! You have a crazy Christmas. I loved that you shared on what time you had to go to bed. But next time if you add a title it would be even better. Otherwise great job!

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  3. I wish I could go to California! I really liked your story and I feel like the only thing you could've changed is the title.

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