Every year, On Christmas Eve we all gather around the dinning table and have a big feast. This feast includes Big steaks, Mashed potatoes, Apple cider, Yams, Salad, Rolls, stuffing, broccoli, and pasta. The dessert is my favorite part: Chocolate fudge, Homemade pie, Divinity, cupcakes, cookies, caramel brownies, jello, peppermint ice cream, and hot chocolate. Another tradition we have is also on Christmas Eve, and we all Frost cookies for Santa Claus, and then read a christmas story.
Christmas is my favorite Holiday! Merry Christmas!!
Reading your story made me hungry! I like how you listed all the foods you eat in your yummy feast. One thing you could improve on is adding some other things you do for your Christmas traditions. Other than that is was great!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I really loved reading your paragraph. It made me really hungry;) My family also eats a huge feast maybe even bigger than thanksgiving. I like how you added what you ate and the yummy deserts(that's also my favorite part) One thing you could've added was more detail on what you did but good job!
ReplyDeleteI love your paragraph! You made me hungry. You used very good adjectives. And it really created a picture in m mind. But maybe next time you could make it a little longer. Otherwise, good job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job alivia you did great! you did really make me hungry but you did great.
ReplyDeleteYou did really good! All of the food that you put in their sounded good. Next time try to put more details.
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