My dearest Jack Dawson,
Iv'e lived my whole life without you, and I can't wait for us to meet again. I remeber the salty air and the freshly carved wood as we climed aboard the titanic, "The Greatest Ship in the World." And I also remeber the way the ship tumbled down into not only the dark crashing water, but a sea of people. As I looked into your eyes that terrifing night I could see peace. You gave me the courage to never let go, and i'm thankful for that. Near, far wherever you are I will always love you!
Forever and always,
Rose Bukater
this definitely seems like something that would be written as a love letter. I don't really see anything you could do differently. Nice (and slightly creepy) imagery by the way.
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ReplyDeleteThis is so good! I love the choose of words!
ReplyDeleteGood job,your really good at describing I almost thought I was in the boat.
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