Tuesday, February 28, 2017
If people loved each other as much as they loved themselves...
Everything would be sooo much different from .how the world is now, there would not be so much greediness and so much that are poor. Every one would be part of a beautiful community where we all shared and helped the ones who need food,clothes etc. For instance, now in days there are a lot of people doing bad and stealing and killing if the world was were everyone loved each others and they do to themselves there would be no war, no fighting and peace. The truth is everything would be less complicated and simple. As you can see, that is what i think the world would be if everyone loved each other as they love themselves.
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Great job! I think you're right, If everyone loved other people as much as themselves, there would be less poor and less fighting. People would live in harmony. However, if everyone loved other people as much as themselves, would we reconize it as love, or take it all for granted. Keep up the good work! If you revise, some of your sentences would flow better if you added more periods.
ReplyDeleteIt was a funny and weird story! I think you could've done better on punctuation and spelling.
ReplyDeleteGood job on your writing. I liked how you explained what would change and how it would be better. One think to change is the grammar as it was a bit hard to read.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I really like how you pointed out the bad things that are happening now and how they would get better in the future.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I really like how you pointed out the bad things that are happening now and how they would get better in the future.
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