I couldn't come up with anything for option 2 that wouldn't be utterly embarrassing, so I'm just going to do option 1. Here you go:
If we lived in a world where everyone loved each other the way they loved themselves, nothing would really change. Just think about it. Most people these days who truly love others, then learn to love themselves the same way. And people who hate others and shut out the world, usually really dislike themselves. It's simple: you give out what you give in. You may be wondering about narcissist people, who seem to love themselves when completely shutting out the world. But what you may not think about is that most narcissist people elevate themselves and try to make themselves seem better than everyone else to cover up their insecurities and the fact that they really hate themselves. If those people loved others the way they loved themselves, it would be more of untrue love than real love. It would be almost like giving someone a complement, but with a sneer on your face. This brings up another question. What if people loved others the way they treated them? Would their kindness then truly be heartfelt, and not just because society demands it? And how much better would the world be than?
Oh wow, that was really deep... think about it.
That was really deep, I think that you have a good point there, and the essay is written very nicely.
ReplyDeleteI love your story! I really enjoyed all the detail. Try adding more writing next time.
ReplyDeleteWow! That was deep! But it was true, I really enjoyed it, good job!
ReplyDeleteWow! That was deep! But it was true, I really enjoyed it, good job!
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