My unresolution for the year is to stop eating the last part of the food. I know this is strange but it is something I always do. Whenever my sister makes brownies or cookies I always make sure I have the last one. I have no clue why I do this but I do. I even sometimes eat the last slice of cake or pie from my families birthday cake. Sometimes I also snack on the last leftovers we have which sometimes makes my mom mad. Well this will probably only last for about a week but I least I will try. That is why my unresolution is to stop eating the last portion of the food.
Great job! Next time, use some more commas and split up your sentences! Other than that, I really liked it! Keep up the good work! :)
ReplyDeleteZac I loved your paragraph. I can relate to you. I eat the last piece of food all the time. Also your paragraph made me hungry. Great job! :)
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